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Willowleaf 2008-03-24 ch 8,	abuseA great chapter! One thing you might want to do in the future is put a line or something when changing scenes, it could help cut down on confusion. Here's a theory, the people murdered were from Narika's trial. I have a guess why, but since I doubt the fact that she was going to be killed on the same night was a coincidence, it's probably nowhere near the truth.
Fiction King 2008-03-20 ch 8,	abuseA wonderfully suspenceful chapeter. Most definately a prelude to what is to come. As I quote Rosina, "Things are definitely getting interesting." I eagerly await the next chapter in this series.
Willowleaf 2007-12-28 ch 7,	abuseA great chapter, but I had to read this a couple times because I'm too tired for my poor little brain to take it all in at once. Anyway, once I got over the fact tat I wanted to be in bed, I thought the ending was kind of funny. My question is, is there really a Princess Rosina, or is this just someone that the two made up? I can't wait to read more.
Fiction King 2007-12-23 ch 7,	abuseWhat a wonderful story this is turning out to be. You make me laugh. Your new chapter is overdue? What about mine!
Willowleaf 2007-12-02 ch 6,	abuseYou know what's funny, a few days ago I made the same mistake the servant did. I was with the same numbers and everything! It's a good chapter, and you should keep updating.
Fiction King 2007-11-12 ch 6,	abuseAnother beautiful chapter I must say. On a lesser note now, I to am experiencing a type of writers block. I have so many story ideas they are driving me insane. The one problem is I have no names. How can you write a story without names? Back to you now, I eagerly await another beautiful chapter from your treasure trove of stories. Sincerely, Fiction King
spirit of hope 2007-11-11 ch 6,	abuse"assasinate the assassin!" i luv that! anyway, nice chater, for some reason, I really think she doesn't want to be there, wonder if she'll try killing the prince again? Anyway, update soon! spirit of hope P.S oops! I just realized I signed my last review off wrong. i had been too lazy to sign in, and used my username, which is dragon of spirits, just thought I'd let you know I actually did review... um.. it's 11:30 pm so I'm going to bed now, g'night! lol!
Willowleaf 2007-11-01 ch 5,	abuseFinally we know Narkia's name! Yay! I enjoyed the whole thing with the janitors and the mage. Other than it was a good chapter, theres really no other comments for me to make. Still, you had better update quickly, I still have my sharp stick ready.
King of Kings 2007-10-24 ch 3, anon.	abuseHm...uh-oh. Ominous. I didn't see anything wrong with this chapter...not much else to say, considering it was so short. XP The whole part with the mage was rather funny. ;) Can't wait to read on!
Fiction King 2007-10-22 ch 5,	abuseVery interesting indede. Perhapes this story could eventualy be clasafied as a romance. There is room for it in the plot I must say. A young prince falling in love with a girl whos suposed to be his servent and together their love is tested to the limits by the prices court. A real Romeo and Juliet set up i must say.
dragon of spirits 2007-10-21 ch 5, anon.	abuselol, I like Narika, she knows how to get on someones nerves! lol! anyway, nice chappie! we got the point that she would rather be executed quiet clearly. lol. anyway, update soon! dragon of spirits
Willowleaf 2007-10-21 ch 1,	abuseUpdate faster! Don't make me poke you with my sharp stick.
King of Kings 2007-10-18 ch 2, anon.	abuseHm...so who is this arrival? The girl's silence is interesting...though, it hardly helps her case. What does she hope to accomplish? Or nothing? Hm...I'm interested in her...I'll read on soon.
King of Kings 2007-10-17 ch 1,	abuseWell, short, but very interesting beginning. It seems the assassin designated to kill the prince was not quite...experienced. I liked how you wrote her feelings there. Well written, I'll continue with this. ^^
Willowleaf 2007-09-25 ch 4, anon.	abuseooh, very intresting. It's awful about what happened, I go to a small school too, and it really would be hard.

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