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| destinyangel 2007-12-11 ch 1,  | abuseholy...crap. That was unbelievable. My heart is still pounding hard. Just amazing. |
| Shojogurl 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abusewow...That was awesome! Sad, but really, really good. I loved it! -Shojgurl |
| Kenny's Friend 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseGritty. Made me cringe a little. Was it inspired by the VA Tech and Columbine? Good writing - keep it up. "Ken's Friend" |
| To Write LOVE On Her Arms 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseThis story... is just... wow. You're a talented writer. This story is so brilliant, I feel sick from it. This is just... wow. 9.8 out of 10. Now I feel ill :S |
| xo emo x3 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abusewow. this just seemed so real. your a wonderful writer |
| AgtBauer24 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseOh man, this story is just... scary and feels so real. You did an great job making this story feel so realistic. It was a very thrilling and scary story to read. I felt like I was the narrator going through that horrible experience when I read it. I can't describe how well I thought this story was, it was great, awesome... there are just no words for it. It was very emotional, I liked the ending. Not the part where you find out Holden is going to die too, but for the comments made about life. The fight scene with Chuck was very well written and seemed very realistic. The thoughts of the narrator added to the fear of death. The last lines of the story, the life is glass... I love it, it's a nice way to conclude the story. Great job! This story's going on my favorites list. |
| Drewfiend 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseThat was- wow. I can't even put into words how amazing this story just was. I was literally shivering in fear. So realistic... and so scary... how do you do it? The story hit me hard, harder than most. |