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| Leaves of Labefaction 2008-03-08 ch 7, | abuseOh! Do Mr. George W. Bush! Or that rich Microsoft guy, Bill Gates, right? Or you could try some English or French queen or king. A tyrannic one. I don't know their names or numerals. Great story! -LoL |
| Leaves of Labefaction 2008-03-08 ch 6, | abuselol. This story is so cute. Britney is insane? Okay... Well, keep writing! I find this incredibly entertaining. -LoL |
| Susannah Simon 2008-02-26 ch 7, | abusewow. i didn't know beethoven was schizophrenic.. very nicely written!! it's so sad that he didn't eat the cupcake... i wanna know more about this girl! i love how each of the people in the story have something about them that's different than you would expect... like hitler having a soft side. i don't know. i really like that about this story. suggestions: William Shakespeare, F. Scott Fitzgerald, J K Rowling, Orlando Bloom, Lindsey Lohan, Dolley Madison, Mahatma Ghandi, Mother Theresa. i got loads more, but i just can't think of them now. if you run out of ideas though, the readers are the best people to ask :D "incoherent babble of the other side of a dark tunnel". brilliant. post soon! |
| l337 r0cX3r 2008-02-20 ch 7, | abuseThis story is really cool. I really enjoyed reading it. I don't know exactly what to say, but the idea behind this is brilliant. I'm going to add it to my favs. |
| Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 2008-02-20 ch 7, | abuseNice depiction of Beethoven here; it seems very fitting to have him hear voices. I do always get the impression, in his music, that he was a lonely soul. There is good interaction between him and the girl as well. His throwing out the cupcake is a great statement about his state of mind (sorry if I read too much into this)...it seems as if he is the saner for throwing away the frivolity of public life in favor of his own personal ways. I don't know, it's a very fitting end for this piece. Only thing is...I believed he lived in Vienna most of his life. |
| Ayenti Hwann 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is hilarious! It's really creative :-) |
| Twenty-Six Colours 2007-11-18 ch 6, | abuseOne of the ways cupcake-giving can backfire on you. Oh my, she's even more dangerous than the dictators! |
| Twenty-Six Colours 2007-11-18 ch 5, | abuseYay! Another cupcake chapter! I love these things, and I think if I had some sort of time-traveling device, this is how I'd use it. Not only is baking fun (especially when you personalize the cupcakes) it's a great chance to make some of history's crankiest a little happier. These chapters always make me laugh, and this one was particularly good: “What did you say, child?” “Magical properties,” my favorite part. Happy writing! H. |
| Susannah Simon 2007-11-12 ch 6, | abuseahh! you used my idea! i feel so special now :D :D :D :D :D i remember that "courage the cowardly dog" thing too :) i really liked this one. the end was depressing though! what did she do about the cupcake? did she eat it? or throw it? or attack it with an umbrella? the part about her children was very creative! love it. post soon! ah i can't believe you used my idea :D i feel all tingly inside... |
| Susannah Simon 2007-11-11 ch 5, | abusevery cute! she's so manipulative! oh my gosh! i'm still interested to find out who she is... this looks great :D even though i don't know who himmler is... i'm not very good at history :) great job though! keep it up post soon! |
| Twenty-Six Colours 2007-08-28 ch 4, | abuseI love the way she customizes each cupcake. It makes the gift all the more special :) Ah, so that's the origin of this story? Interesting, that Castro was thought of first. I really like these little stories, they make me feel so happy, knowing that even the sour dictators and lonely mailmen of the world get cupcakes. Keep it up, this is really cute. H. |
| Twenty-Six Colours 2007-08-28 ch 3, | abuseHah, you make it sound like the girl lives in some other world, where she laughs over ours and prepares cupcakes in time to visit us and present them to our dictators. That's pretty awesome. Ooh, shot down by Putin! Ah well, she shouldn't feel so bad about it, I'm sure she wasn't the first to be. But poor main character! She took forever to make that KGB crest! H |
| Twenty-Six Colours 2007-08-28 ch 2, | abuseI love how this girl gets herself in with all the big shot dictators by bribing them with sweets. Cracks me up. Though this was a short one, I still liked it a lot. How'd you come up with this idea, by the way? H. |
| Twenty-Six Colours 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all, I'm sorry for not returning the favor of your lovely reviews. Life, it is crazy. But they were so helpful and really brightened my day. Thank you so much for them :) This story is awesome. I can totally picture this, a really excited girl pummeling Hitler with cheery questions and cupcakes. It's certainly an original portrait you've painted here, as well as a hilarious one. Haha, "Everyone should get presents." Even Hitler. I love how he contemplates the cupcake from all sorts of symbolic angles, but in the end, can't resist the awesomeness of it. How true. H. |
| Hydrangea Syrup of DOOM 2007-08-28 ch 4, | abusefinally description. i liked this chapter a lot more than the rest. i liked how she keeps refering to them as her friends. |