I AM NO TWERP!

OBAMA DESERVES MORE RESPECT!
Wait. I watch Saturday Night Live.
My mistake. Carry on.

I think I love you. This idea is ridiculously cool! It's so neat and consistent without getting dull. So few things these days are as neat and original as this story, so I'm excited. I don't usually read this sort of thing either. The CHANGE is very exciting.

Suggestions: More girls? 70s feminists? Maybe Trieu Thi Trinh or the Trung sisters (female Vietnamese war heroes).

Anyway. Keep up the really amazing work!

I remember you telling me about that guy

That's mine! MY CUPCAKE!
Ha :D

I remember that episode!
Spears scares me in this one!

I guess he's a vanilla person.

Ha! I love this story!

This is funny gigi!
Yes it is me!

Should he have it tested? She didn’t seem like an assassin
I love that part so much!

I love this!It's whimsical and a fun perspective on great historical characters. Here's what I want to know: who's this girl? And who gives her a cupcake on her birthday?

Hey! I just looked over the last five chapters that I didn't review...*is shamefaced*.

I love love love your treatment of Himmler. I am going to crack open a book about him soon, so this was a nice prelude. You add in a lot of little details, which makes it a delight.

Britney. Wow. I like your rendition of her, to be sure, but I believe that her speech might be a bit less...refined. It was downright creepy, though, so I think you got your message across.

It's nice to have Beethoven in the mix. He was a wonderful composer, and a really compelling figure. The 'hearing voices' angle was a good touch, too. Was that actually a symptom that affected him? I have trouble remembering...anyhow, that was a nice scene too. The only thing I would caution you against is calling 'Fur Elise' a 'song'. If you want to use music terminology correctly, then it would be called a 'piece'. Just something that irks me, not a real big problem.

Haha, Stalin questioning the girl about Trotsky...your humor is subtle, and very well-placed. That was a nice snippet too.

Robespierre was excellent; it's nice to get a feel for each of the different centuries. I like that you add that he seemed to be more approachable. His preoccupation with the names was a good touch too.

HAHA. Wow. Obama...that was mightily amusing, truly.

One thing that always stands out about your work is its crisp quality. It flows without a lot of description, but it has a lot of flavor and flair to it. The only thing I would bring to your attention is the fact that there are a few typos and spelling mistakes smattered here and there throughout. Just something to watch for...

~A

Hm...an interesting/eccentric figure? I think Chopin, Poe, or even...uh...Sir Arthur Conan Doyle might be good. They're not out and out odd, but they did have some quirks, I think.

"wilder hair than her history teacher"

"like old arthritic people"

"you'll be dead soon anyway"

Much less humor? I think not.

Haha! This was incredibly amusing! Sorry I haven't dropped you any reviews in a while!

This made my day, honestly. Even evil dictators have feelings.
I do recommend actually rereading your writing before you post it, ;)
May I request Louis XIV? He managed to work without a break for 72 years, its only fair...Or Richelieu! That would be amusing, :D

What a fun little romp! I think I will be reading more!

Is that the end? No! Please post another chapter! This story is so good.

-LoL

PS You've inspired me, I shall now attempt to draw a young girl as you described giving a cupcake to Hitler. ^.^

Oh! Do Mr. George W. Bush! Or that rich Microsoft guy, Bill Gates, right? Or you could try some English or French queen or king. A tyrannic one. I don't know their names or numerals. Great story!

-LoL