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| Angababe. 2008-05-16 ch 13,  | abuseoh. lovely drama. I love this story. keep up the good work. |
| Angababe. 2007-11-19 ch 11, | abuseooh. tuck gets all defensive. i loved this chap. update soon! |
| meh.teh.jim 2007-10-24 ch 10, | abuseUm. That wasn't the END, was it? I finished reading it, woot! It's good, but the whole skipping 4 months ahead thing upsets meh... Perhaps I would understand more if there were another chapter... Also, what happened to Tuck?? Why didn't he get all in Jeff's face? |
| saxgoddess 2007-10-13 ch 10, | abuseThis is a really good story! I look forward to the next installment:-D |
| Angababe. 2007-10-07 ch 10, | abuseahahah tiny penis and he doest know how to use it. god i effing love this story. :D |
| Twilight Starr 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseGood beginning. This story definitely has potential. Good luck with writing and this story. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| meh.teh.jim 2007-09-05 ch 7, | abuseOkay, kind of a proper review. [But I'm still not finished reading] It's seems kind of really fast paced, and sometimes I'm not too sure who is talking... But I like the story, and I like smexy britsh and irish dudes... Also, check your gaia. |
| meh.teh.jim 2007-08-26 ch 2, | abuseok, let me finish reading this, and I'll review. Just so you know, cuz it might take me a couple of days. So far it's an interesting story [one chick surrounded by all guys? HOO-SHA!] but wouldn't her mom have known about the school belonging to her uncle, or something? Anyways, that's all I have to say right now. More later. |
| Screwy Lewy 2007-08-23 ch 7, | abuseHey i have read the other chapters already but i was too lazy to review them so yea... amazing story you've got here too bad it only has a couple reviews but i will eventually get around to reviewing the others maybe... i actually have something to say though maybe on a later chapter you can switch the story and go from a different person's point of view maybe Oscar eh? bye ~Screwy Lewy |
| Angababe. 2007-08-19 ch 6, | abuseAhahahah loads and loads of porn eh? I really love this story. update? Ang. :D |
| Angababe. 2007-08-18 ch 5, | abuseAhahaha I love this story! This chapter was very funny. I think I like Tuck the best. I love how you update so quickly. please keep up the great work, Ang. :D |
| Bantom 2007-08-17 ch 4, | abusewow that was intense! The only criticism i have is that a few words were over used like "worm". well maybe thats just me, but it seemed to be over used. and the phrase "sorry excuse for..." maybe you could change it up a little bit. other than that everything was great! (plus the typos, but thats just Word's fault) |