this chapter was a bit skippy at the end. it was like i was catching moments and not whole telling of wat was going on.

Ah why does it have to end? I was enjoying it so much even if it was kinda loose and sometimes hard to follow but it is an exceptional story. I'd like to read more of how Riley and Alex are trying to survive with just each other as anchors. Maybe trying to discover what the dreams are? Alex is kinda just there and not really a part of the story in the later chapters and I think it would be nice if he was more within the story like in the earlier chapters.
Maybe think of a place these two are trying to get to, a kinda paradise of the mind, so to speak where both are comfortable and can put the past behind them? Maybe running from authorities? Just a few ideas of where the tale could go. Just don't let it go where it is, finish it! Great story; keep going!

Dramatic chapter. Great job. It was very haunting. Sorry for taking so long to review.

~Twilight Starr

Great addition. Poor thing. You made me want to cry for her. I hope your exams go/went well. I'm looking forward to whatever you have next. Sorry for taking so long to R&R. Have a fantastic summer.

~Twilight Starr~

Wow. That last line was very heavy. Nice addition. Have a great day.

~Twilight Starr~

Great chapter and ending. I loved Reily's narration in this chapter. Please update soon. Nice work. Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~

Awesome I love this story! Im happy you updated! I cant wait for you to update!

Cute, short chapter. I liked the addition. Nice work. Have a lovely day.

~Twilight Starr~

i like it

Yay! You updated. Great chapter. Spilling the drink on the dress--classic. The half-sister put was amusing (and it doesn't need to be capitialized). Hopefully your writer's block is over for good. Looking forward to more.

~Twilight Starr~

Cute chapter.

I love it! :)

Please update soon.

~Twilight Starr~

i love this story. its so cute and sweet. continue please.

aww! thats so sweet! ...and shes not drunk this time?

I like the story. It has bunches of potential.

Please update soon. :)

~Twilight Starr~

I noticed you keep using the plural verison of 'woman' when you should use 'woman'.

Good chapter. I feel sorry for Riley because of her mom and abusive father.

~Twilight Starr~