this is beautiful. i love repeating the first line later on. i really like that, i don't know why.

Structure. This piece is craving it. Line breaks, more stanzas and a better flow would help the read and aesthetic of the entire poem. It's not that it's bad, it just needs to be "cleaner". Some of the personal touches are very good but you also can easily clear out a lot of little words i.e. "just" on L1 S2.

Otherwise I really like this, it just needs some organization.

Midnight

i love, love, love this.

"So I can’t rant about my lack of love life or my new makeup."

That was by far my favorite line.

That 3. I'm not sure why, but it kind of says something about the poem for me. 3 words in "I love you"? I don't know. But this is truly magnificent. I love EVERYTHING about it. I have no choice but to add this to my favorites. If I don't I truly will have failed as a poet.

Well Serena, I hope you told her then...

I just had to read it. You love deeply. pen to paper is your healing balm. thanks for speaking what is in our hearts.