|Reviews for Queer Drizzles|
| xDancingintheRainx 8/20/07 . chapter 1
I like this piece too. Actually, I can't remember ever finding a piece of yours that I didn't like. ) Its been raining where I live for the past few days now and this seemed like an appropriate poem to read at this time. I really like the imagery. Its beautiful and foggy/misty almost. My favorite stanzas are: "Windows in discontented frost,
I trace my fingers along it,
Forming my name,
In transparencies of the fragile ice;"
"Lifeless but hopeful skies say
Words in drizzles that wash me,
Until I’m completely blanched
That no one can see me.
“The infinite tears would be continued soon…”
Great ending. Great piece. Keep up the great work!
| Renee Conner 8/18/07 . chapter 1
I love how beautiful this sounds. 10/10 for me.
| Kusje 8/17/07 . chapter 1
I can't tell you how much I really enjoy this poem - It definitely is a favorite now, haha. I'm not sure what to make of this poem. You did such an excellent job with the versus and making everything just seem... to fit perfectly with each other.
I'll be honest, when I saw the title with 'Queer Drizzles', I was a little bit hesitant, haha.
Favoriting! Thank you so much for reviewing my haiku's. I'll be back to review more of yours!