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| Ammom 2007-09-06 ch 1,  | abuseWhat I loved about this poem, was these lines, "just a flash- quick as lightening then let it disappear; quiet." How you compared the pain to how it'll be hidden; in a single, startling moment. Almost unseen, but still there. |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseSo sad! But very well written! Keep it up! Kristie Marie |
| Fading Memories 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseAmazing and heartbreaking. I'm glad you published something new, I really like your work! |