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| Tytherpol 2007-08-21 ch 1,  | abuseThe last two lines of this are a little unexpected. I like how they relates to the title, but it does seem so different from the rest. I think I like it. Sorta quirky. :) "churning it slowly" stands out to me because it brings so much into the picture. It's a cool piece. Yours, -ty. |