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| SerialXLain 2007-12-11 ch 3, | abuseJesus christ... Every time I sit down to read this my mother ** at me to do something. -_- :ignores her this time: lmao... Kane and Alex are both cute in their own little ways. I must say that I enjoy them both. :) I'd probably cry if someone licked me...so I feel Kane's pain. xo |
| gummybaby 2007-11-17 ch 3, | abusethis story is just so much fun to read! thanks for sharing. |
| SerialXLain 2007-09-02 ch 2, | abuseI really want some cheesecake now. Hm. I don't have much to say this time. But I'll review anyway 'cause I liked the chapter. *glances around* |
| SerialXLain 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseBoo-o-o-o-o-o Anne Rice. :( "You wanna pet my duck" is officially going to be my official pick-up line... ;D Speaking of pick-up lines... Pft. Kane sucks. :( I think they're hilarious. *sigh* Hurray for new(ish...by the time I get around to them) stories. xo |
| SolitarySigh 2007-08-26 ch 2, | abuseInteresting story. Alex is a really unique character and reading about him is like listening to some really hyper kid talk (and I mean that in a good way). It's a refreshing style. If I could make one suggestion, it would be to use the names of characters more often, especially when you change who you're talking about or change the character who's speaking. I get confused about who I'm reading about and have to go back and disect the paragraph to figure out what's going on. Good story though! |
| Oki3xDoki3 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abusestory is like a drug...omg i cant wait to read the next one! |
| Amindaya 2007-08-25 ch 2, | abuseWell I totally love it so far. :D Especially the theater aspect of it. |
| nonaccount 2007-08-24 ch 2, | abuseOh, I really like this idea! Lex is like totally awesome to the max, dude! He, he . . . anyway, very funny. I love these lines, "'So, basically, I'm a total hero,'" and "'I'm like the world champion of whining, and I pretty much love myself. Now back to your angst.'" I love the way Lex talks, it had me smiling the whole time I read this. :) |
| Killian I 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot. The characters are original and I really ennjoy Kane's point of view. |
| Unknown Sadie 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseHm. Well this story is quite interesting, and I'm not usually one to jump in on a story in its first chapter but here I am anyway. The character personalities are quite unique (Well Alex anyway, Kane's personality has been done before again and again) and I like the sense of seeing both sides of the spectrum between the two. There's no sense of an immediate friently relationship, which usually leads to a more respectful and better lasting relationship. A bit more description could have been useful and maybe some more in depth character background so we might understand a little more about Kane and Alex. Otherwise, it's starting out pretty good. I'll keep it on watch. Trust me, I'm not usually this tame on my reviews, but I quite enjoyed this. Keep it up. (By the by, I do realize that this is based on a true story, I'm just voicing my opinion) Keep writing and I'll keep reading! ~Sadie~ |