Amazing! I wish I could write like that!
Sometimes it felt more like a story or fairytale than a poem, but I'm no expert... Gave me a warm feeling inside anyway :)

Very profound with a nice "story"line. Pretty impressive!

That was an amazing poem. You are very precocious. Theres was no need for ryhme, yetyou managed to instill it, therefore giving the poem a distinct mood and melody. This is spectacular work.