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Faithless Juliet
2007-08-19
ch 1,
abuseI like how truthful this piece is, personally I'm a born perfectionsit and it's hard for me to except the fact that sometimes I just can't be perfect, but I think admiting that is also healthy in a way. Anyway I really enjoyed this piece, and I loved its honesty, it's heartbreaking in it realizsum - knowing that you can and will never be apart of the perfection wheel of life. I admire your strength to just be yourself. Anyway, like I said, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.
Toxic.Industrial.Waste
2007-08-17
ch 1,
abuseAS usual I love this one! The ending really tied it all together. Every girl knows how this feels. Well, every teenager really. This one is going on my favorites. I love how it sounds as if you are stumbling over your own words.
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