Wow I LOVED that. Full of emotion, completely heartfelt & deep. You are talented!

I just recently posted 2 stories and I was wondering if you could read and review them with honest feedback/suggestions. Opinions from a writer like you would be amazing!

Good poem. It is true that we are the memory keepers for loved ones who have died.

SirScott

The title correlates so well to the actual content of the poem that it makes every line become increasingly better and more suspenseful than the one prior. 'you smudge a smile'- my favorite. Favoriting.

another one full of emotion and heart! WOW!