Reviews for Way after First Sight

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faithful.dream 2008-05-03 ch 18,	abuseCUTE ! you said there was another chapter coming? or did i just make that up?
violet-eyez 2008-03-26 ch 18,	abuseso will they break up or do the long distance relationship thing
telepop 2008-03-25 ch 18,	abuseOkay I'm going to be frank. Chapter 18 was kind of sucky. Like too rushed, for sure. I mean I thought there was going to be a HUGE climatic moment, (besides the Danny part) But then BAM Jon and her are together? When did this exactly happen? Jeez. Like if this was the epilogue then I might let it slide. But nah.
Isabella22 2008-03-25 ch 18,	abuseGreat chap! They're perfect for each other! Update soon. I'm going to miss this story when it's finished. Btw, was the car keying thing real, or just a cover story so the parents don't have to really tell what happened to Danny?
QueenoftheCourt 2008-03-24 ch 18,	abuseSo I just finished this. It was pretty good, though I feel this last chapter was a bit rushed--I mean, one minute they're just becoming friends, and the next they're dating? Nevertheless, this is still a great story so keep up the good work and update soon! :-)
tetggd 2008-03-24 ch 14, anon.	abuse"I had no idea where nay of" "any"
telepop 2008-03-24 ch 12, anon.	abuseBreak ups happen but honestly Jon is kind of a D-bag. The beatles rock.
telepop 2008-03-24 ch 11, anon.	abuseYou’re evil, boo cliff-hangers. Have you ever read Clowngirl? There’s this one part in the beginning and near the ending of the book about how she heard that Buddhists say that when you find your true love, soul mate you will be completely calm, not anxious or nervous. I think I believe that. You know? How can you love someone only when you get tingles from being by them or by their looks and touch? I find that purely only sexual. I knew that she was going to end up with Jon; I just knew it because obviously romances are pretty darn predictable. But I love the upbeat of them, so that’s why I’m a true fan. I just I don’t know. When did she get the feelings? It’s not that clear, and I have to admit it ** me off that she doesn’t like Nathan mainly because he’s a “good guy” like you said in the earlier chapters because, yeah girls are like that. Even though the guy is horrible they stay with him. Or he cheated or whatever but eh they say love is blind, I guess that’s a truer meaning than I thought. It’s dumb. But I know that could possibly be hypocritical of me in the future because I’m only in grade nine and I have still yet to have a bf. Although I see my best friend with dumbasses like that and I don’t understand it. Moving on though before I yap on more about a pointless topic I can’t change because in the end, it is what it is. You know, instantly once you described Mrs. Stennings I totally thought of that woman Imelda Staunton (yes I looked her up) off Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix movie. The old bag who seemed so sweet and she loved kitties and the color pink but she was an evil old woman in disguise. Like I know Mrs. Steenings couldn’t be as bad but I just thought of her, weird. You know what I never understood though, about real life teachers. How they can be completely nasty and rude to kids but they manage to get married. Maybe they put up a charade to make sure the kids don’t take advantage of them but act all nice around everyone else, I had a grade 8 math teacher like that, ugh. Also the idea of Mayans prediction of the world ending in 2012, where’d you get that because that was totally random and hey did you make it up? :P. I doubt it but you have some smarty noggin. I like how there are some chapters kind of funny, and then some uber dramatic. It’s awesome. You guessed it I found an error, silly willy ones though. “It was just he TA, and he wouldn't give me a note” “the TA”. “But the world never stoops, no matter how much you want it to.” “stops” “I gave a chocked, half-hysterical giggle” Is it “choked” or “shocked”? You say lame a lot. Why don’t you spice it up with incredibly and outrageously awesome words like corny or cheesetastic. Okay cheesy, cheestastic isn’t proper English (too bad).
telepop 2008-03-24 ch 9, anon.	abuseWell there's not enough e's in this universe to finish the nice I was thinking of typing so anyhow I have to agree how anticlimactic. She didn't even hit him over the head, psshh BORE ING. Nah I'm glad he wasn't such a hole filled with dick but I know people can change, but I've always believed you really just can't. A dad who raped his daughter will always be the cruel bastard and a murderer can't really change either because of the addiction and thrill psychologically inked in their head. I believe that a ** leopard can't change its spots. That all being said I wonder what's going to happen next. I think you could phrase "Bee, I would really appreciate it if you would stop insulting me and my family" to "my family and I"
telepop 2008-03-24 ch 8, anon.	abuseNice. Chapter. But two mistakes. "If anyone was going to be dumped it should be here, he thought" I think it should be "her" not "here". Second, "Alison was instantly enamored, and well, he did have a nice smile". It's spelled enamoured. That's it. I fricken love this story. Just pretty pointless that Nathan brought his siblings, tis all.
telepop 2008-03-23 ch 7,	abuseOH MY GOD. That's really sad actually. The whole story, you gave hints about him hitting her but still jesus.
telepop 2008-03-23 ch 6,	abuseOh yeah a twist. Also about like a few chapters ago when you said you broke something. Hee your elbow, I remembered! By the way I’m wondering now how it is possible to break your elbow but moving on. I'm sorry about that. Like I know you're possibly healed and everything but it really must still suck majorly. I remember when I sprained my ankle on a trampoline (I forget how it happened) but yeah it uh hurt. So yeah I know a sprain isn't compared to anything like something completely broken or uh but in the end most of the time it will heal and that's awesome :P Anyways, about this one sentence it doesn't really make sense to me "suddenly Bee and my rivalry was the funniest thing ever". Like it could be phrased better, because It's a tad confusing but yeah for the sake of checking everything. I think I’ll just shut up now, nice chapter.
telepop 2008-03-23 ch 5,	abuseWow Emily seems like she had major dick amnesia. But I still feel sorry for her. Christ that was a good chapter. Sure a tad cheese and a tiny wad of corny. But still pretty good.
telepop 2008-03-23 ch 4,	abuseHaha this was a really good chapter. Pretty funny especially the the second of the several reasons she wasn't going to ask him out :P I can't wait to read more. I really thought Jon was gonna ask her out.
WriterGurl123 2008-03-23 ch 18,	abuseOf course I finish reading the story once it's almost over! I wish I had found this sooner. I don't want this to end. I'm glad that Epi had gotten over Danny and his butt-hole self, and I'm happy that her and Jon are going out. I think it's adorable. Post More Soon!

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