Reviews for Resistance Broken

Without a Kite 2008-05-29 ch 1,	abuseThis is a wonderful poem. As I was reading it, I had to comply with its urgency and start reading faster. Then, the last two words just kind of halted me in my place as goose bumps sprung on my arms.
Susannah Simon 2007-08-24 ch 1,	abuseoh! the last line!! i was like AHH!! i LOVE how the italics show a flashback-type-thing while the normal text is the actual scene. it provides some background story. i really like it!! great job! -suze
Sophie Ulquiorra Allen 2007-08-18 ch 1,	abuseAha, taking a page out of my book with your sexual poetry? Very powerful imagery here, although sometimes what you're saying does get redundant (I, for one, wouldn't mention 'resistance breaking' in the earlier part of the poem. Anyway, apart from that, very well done! :)
MoonlitDespair 2007-08-17 ch 1,	abuseUm... Katy? Is that really you behind the computer?? Gasp! This seems like it's written from experience. Is there something you're not telling me??