i love the repetition in the end of "in the moonlight". and the glitter reference gave me a really good visual! very descriptive. i like it! -suze

what is that song? i tried to look it up on youtube but they didn't have it. anyway it was a pretty good poem but then again it is a poem so i can't really say much else.

I like this poem, and the repetitive phrases work really well here. The last five lines are great; I've never seen the 'ravishing' verb in the female-to-male context. Interesting...