Interesting chapter. It's kind of funny that he fell to sleep. Nice work. =]

~Twilight Starr~

That ending sounded like trouble. ;) Nice addition.

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The ending made me laugh. Nice twist. Keep writing!

~Twilight Starr~

Cute chapter up until the end. Nice cliffhanger. Lovely work. Have a great day. :)

~Twilight Starr~

Lol, I don't think I'm better than you, of course. ;)

They are so adorable together! It's so darn cute. ^^

Great job!

~Twilight Starr~

aw..
my heart is fluttering now, and i'm not even in the story!

Cute chapter.

Please update soon. :)

~Twilight Starr~

Your penname is interesting. :)

Good chapter.

I look forward to seeing more of this story to see if they actually meet each other's parents.

~Twilight Starr~

Interesting chapter.

It's a good start.

I'm pretty for sure I'm going to like this story.

~Twilight Starr~

it's connected?
hahaha. okay. need to read that now.
i like the fact that it does not end like the typical cliched stories, but WHY..
XP ah, the irony.

whoa. they sound very very much in love.
=) that's sweet.