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| Twilight Starr 2008-08-23 ch 8,  | abuseInteresting chapter. It's kind of funny that he fell to sleep. Nice work. =] ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-08-03 ch 7, | abuseThat ending sounded like trouble. ;) Nice addition. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-07-14 ch 6, | abuseThe ending made me laugh. Nice twist. Keep writing! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-02-13 ch 5, | abuseCute chapter up until the end. Nice cliffhanger. Lovely work. Have a great day. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-30 ch 4, | abuseLol, I don't think I'm better than you, of course. ;) They are so adorable together! It's so darn cute. ^^ Great job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| found.eventually 2007-08-29 ch 3, | abuseaw.. my heart is fluttering now, and i'm not even in the story! |
| Twilight Starr 2007-08-28 ch 3, | abuseCute chapter. Please update soon. :) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-08-21 ch 2, | abuseYour penname is interesting. :) Good chapter. I look forward to seeing more of this story to see if they actually meet each other's parents. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseInteresting chapter. It's a good start. I'm pretty for sure I'm going to like this story. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| found.eventually 2007-08-19 ch 2, | abuseit's connected? hahaha. okay. need to read that now. i like the fact that it does not end like the typical cliched stories, but WHY.. XP ah, the irony. |
| found.eventually 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abusewhoa. they sound very very much in love. =) that's sweet. |