I love how some parts rhyme and some don't but everything still fits together and works beautifully. You are very talented. I also like how you break up your songs and put notes in such as the (fade out with chorus) so that its obviously meant to be with music.

You're always so good at describing emotions! I love the words you use in this song! This will go in my favorites! Keep it up and keep writing!
The Reverse Edge Blade