This was nice! I liked how you expressed your feelings with your words. Keep it up!
The only thing I would like to point out, is the length of the poem. Maybe you could have shortened it? I noticed that many lines was repeated very many times.
Other than that, a great poem!
The Reverse Edge Blade

i really really like the idea of this. the one problem i have with it is the enormous amount of repitition it has. i mean, A LOT. but if you don't repeat the lines, separately they're all beautiful.

This is really good. I like the rhyme scheme and the rhythm. Wonderful work!

Oh my yes. I think we have all done this with someone. The last part is especially true and heartbreaking. Wonderful job with the rhyming, not forced at all. At least it didn't seem to me. Keep up the great work!