Reviews for Falling Into Darkness

Anglachele 2008-02-02 ch 1,	abuseThe questions asked make me think as much about the narrator as the person being asked. I feel like the person being asked can't answer the questions positively. But there's still a chance that they might be able to. But then it almost sounds like the narrator knows the other person well enough to answer those questions.I like the unusual structure, which seems lyrical, but also like a dialogue.
simpleplan13 2007-10-24 ch 1,	abusePainful memory's hunt my mind.. memories I like the repetition and the format a lot.. very sad and powerful piece.. I love the long stanza in the middle
Flechette 2007-08-17 ch 1,	abuseI'm not trying to be crude but who hasnt been through a rough time? My whole life has been a rough time. But thats what gives you the inspiration to write. To teach the lessons you have already learned. However this poem is very cliche. It says the same things in the same ways with the same words that everybody else uses them. I'm sorry but this has no emotion to me.