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| Anglachele 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseNicely put questions of introspection. These are the things that need to be asked and the way they need to be asked. I am especially moved by the last question. It betrays the uncertainty and self-doubt that haunts love relationships. |
| simpleplan13 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI really like this a lot... the questions it asks are great... and i can definitely relate to it.. nicely done |
| Flechette 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty good. I can see the emotion in this one. Its still a little simple and cliche in some ways... but overall the emotion comes across... |