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| Anglachele 2008-01-30 ch 1,  | abuseThe perfect way to deal with Satan or any one evil. It's just so well put. Everything that needs to be said to anything that the devil puts in our way. I like the rhyming scheme, too. I think it's very original. This would sound good put to music. |
| In State of Agony 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abuseok i like it however you force the rhyme its just my opinion so...i hope that you like a good critic like i do and dont get upset. This world is ((In State Of Agony)) |
| simpleplan13 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI like this... very uplifting and determined.. the repetition was nice and the message was great |
| Flechette 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseVery cliche! I know its just venting but its still the same message that everyone else is trying to get across in the same words... the line "It's all a flux verse to a rhythm." was very original and creative. Why can't the rest of your stuff be? |