Reviews for Funeral Procession

whispered something profoun... 2007-08-18 ch 1,	abuse"particip-action"? lol THAT doesn't look like a forced rhyme or anything. it was funny though. the rest isn't funny really so it doesn't fit well.
criti-sized 2007-08-18 ch 1,	abuseAnother good poem, though I didn't feel this one was as strong as the last one. It still held a lot of emotion. I liked the ryhmes in it that gave the poem a softer note to it. C.S.