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dances.with.sunflowers.
2008-07-25
ch 7,
abuseI KNOW! THEY FAV AND RUN! There's no fun in that (of course, I only have that problem on FanFiction, but)! You don't get any "OMYGOODNESS I LOVED YOUR STORY! YOU'RE AWESOME!" business. Because seriously, that's the best part of reviews. ;D So to finish that thought, -ahem- OMYGOODNESS I LOVED YOUR STORY! YOU'RE AWESOME! Yeah! XD XD XD XD XD XD XD

-dances.with.sunflowers.
dances.with.sunflowers.
2008-07-25
ch 6,
abuseBAHAHA! I /died/ when he fell over while spying!! And Lori trying to figure out how to greet him on the phone was *genius* I tell you, *genious*!

-dances.with.sunflowers.
dances.with.sunflowers.
2008-07-25
ch 4,
abuse-GASP- EGAD! LORI /CANNOT/, I REPEAT, /CANNOT/ FALL IN LOVE WITH CALEB! I DON'T CARE IF HE'S CUTE, SHE HAS ULTRA SWEET AND ADORABLE AND TALENTED NICHOLAS!

-dances.with.sunflowers.
dances.with.sunflowers.
2008-07-24
ch 1,
abuseDon't you hate it when people fav. and run? I don't have time to read it all right now, but I will!! Promise! ;D And I absolutely love the story! XD

The ever review friendly,
-dances.with.sunflowers.

ps- M, what's your secret to attracting that ungodly amount of reviews? ;) I've seen stories around here and most of the time, they are lucky to get 10 people to review every 25,0 words.
JustAnotherLibroLover
2008-07-14
ch 1,
abuselove that last scene!
hee hee
still crackin' up here... ah good times, good times...
pepperr.
2008-07-06
ch 7,
abuseGreat story! I can't find anything wrong with it at all. Your writing style is so amusing. Hope you update soon. (:

p.
angst muffin
2008-07-03
ch 7,
abuseoh, that poor nicholas is such a silly boy. NOTHING could ever put an end to the gay fanfiction. nothing. xD

i really love this story. like, i couldn't stop reading all day. and that's saying something, because i usually only read slash. your writing is excellent and the flow of the story is very nice and strung together well. keep up the good work! i can't wait for the next update! :D
Awkward.Chaos
2008-06-22
ch 7,
abuseI would seriously punch Vivien in the face. She's really annoying. But the story is amazing! It's really unique, and the characters are awesome.
Beyond-the-Shadows
2008-06-21
ch 7,
abuseI like it! LOL update soon
lacy-9
2008-06-20
ch 4,
abuse! she cant take another guy to a concert for the guy who wrote her a song! thats just cruel...
Laura Schiller
2008-06-15
ch 7,
abusePlease update?
Laura Schiller
2008-06-15
ch 1,
abuseNicholas sounds really interesting and unique, and the bantering between him and Lori is funny. And how sweet it would be to have a song written for you...*swoon*
Unknown Penman
2008-06-12
ch 7,
abuseOkay. I have an idea for future chapters. Like the very last one. How about Nic caught Caleb out with another girl and when he told Lori she did not belive him. She thought he was just jealous ( because Vin ((Im just going to call her that, Okay?)) told Lori some thing that was not true, like I dont know u come up with something!). And then at the end when shes on a date with Caleb (JERK!!) all of a sudden Nic comes in with the girl. The girl yells at Caleb. Caleb tells Lori its not what it looks like, Lori pours her drink on his head, calls him a ** or something like that, and walks over and kisses Nic. Oh, and the last chapter could be their wedding!
always&forever
2008-06-10
ch 7, anon.
abuseawhh its really cute, Lorie is clueless.. and Nicholas, kinda reminds me of myself in a umm guy version, but I cant sing and im not famous.. just inlove with someone who dosnt know :) Post more,
Romiscado
2008-06-08
ch 7,
abuseI give you an a natural: an a for the story, and a natural because that's what you are! A natural story-writer!

Ok, that was really lame. But seriously, thanks for the story!

Romiscado
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