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| boys kiss girls 2007-12-19 ch 1,  | abuseTeehee... I love the descriptions and the emotion behind this. You're brave for posting this. =) |
| Knfarns 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseI like this very much. Very short and to the point. :D Well written/ GJ |
| whispered something profoun... 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. I love how the word "fading" actually seems to fade away because of the fonty things you used. Its also very easy to relate to, whether you've experienced something like this or just kind of dreamt of it. *sigh* |
| Ashelin 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseI liked the ending. The parenthesis of "(perhaps)" added to the drama too. Good job. |