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SerialXLain
2007-08-20 . chapter 1
Sad. :(
I really like the last two lines and the "blood clots on the street" line...
Nice job. *insert heart here*
xo
Johanna
2007-08-18 . chapter 1
Yours was aawsome and sad, i LOVED it!
Ashelin
2007-08-18 . chapter 1
This is sad, and a harsh reality. The third, fourth, and fifth "stanzas" really got to me. All I can say is great job.
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