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| Jamith 2008-03-22 ch 4,  | abuseAwesome. I just don't want to see the kind of trouble Ren's going to get in when she gets home. I can't wait for more. |
| Goddess of Trix 2008-03-13 ch 4, | abuseThis was a really cute chapter. ^^ I can't wait until you update this. ^^ It's adorable. I don't really like Ren's mom though. I don't see how parents can be so strict like that. ^^; I don't like Lexie either. She didn't even get to know Taura before judged her. Nice though! Good job! |
| Goddess of Trix 2008-03-13 ch 2, | abuseHaving two languages adds something to the story. ^^ I like it. ^^ |
| Like a love sick puppy 2008-02-10 ch 4, | abuseThis is sweet! Please continue! |
| Mangaka-wannabe92 2007-12-08 ch 4, | abuseI'm so wierd I JUST realized this is femslash...and it doesn't disturb me as much as I thought it would...hmm...maybe its because I'm in highschool now and encounter this all the time? Oh well, the plot seems to be coming along smoothly, and I believe I shall continue to read this, very few if any grammar mistakes, and also their relation ship seems to progress at a normal realistic speed. In a short and to the point sentence...I want more and you will write more because your skills are awesome! Also just so you know if you are to reply to this I won't answer because my e-mail isn't working...dumb computers... |
| PrettyAwkward 2007-09-22 ch 4, | abuseRen seems so much like a little kid, it was cute though. And I'm glad Taura got her mind rid of Anna for a little. Update soon. |
| Queen of Dragonnor 2007-09-02 ch 2, | abuseInserting Swedish into the story is cool. I met this half Swedish, half American family in the Stockholm airport once. I hate people like Lexie. They're so annoying! Oh, and I absolutely love Fantasie Impromptu! Props for putting that in the story. :) |
| Queen of Dragonnor 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseOoh, this is interesting so far. :D I can definitely relate to Taura; I also have a friend who's name is Anna... And you can figure out the rest. In some places there were tense shifts, which confused me a bit. x_x |
| Gogoh 2007-09-02 ch 3, | abuseUmm...I'm trying to understand the language and...but yeah, I know 'the song'! But I think the girls are taking far too long to unite, or maybe you're planning on a long story, I guess. But reading it was fun, though you could've used a little more of the thesaurus...but hell, I liked it! |
| PrettyAwkward 2007-08-23 ch 3, | abusethis is a good chapter, nothing really much, but it shows a little more into ren. which is good, get a lil feeling for each character. and i thought the same thing when anna showed up, she was going to confess her love, but just a bf thing. bummer for taura. still good tho. update soon. |
| perpetual questions 2007-08-22 ch 3, | abuseStill going well. You're right, the chapter wasn't exciting, but it wasn't boring either. Good job. |
| PrettyAwkward 2007-08-20 ch 2, | abuseI've never seen the Swedish language before, its pretty cool. And the story seems like its going to be interesting. Update soon. |
| perpetual questions 2007-08-20 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter. Going well; I'll keep reading. |
| perpetual questions 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseI usually only read poetry on this site, but I was just listening to the title song and I had to see what this was about. It's well written and I'll await more. Nice work. |
| vaudeville summers 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I'll admit, the title drew me in (I love that song to pieces) but what you wrote is so...so good. I want moree xD |