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| Fan Fan 2007-11-16 ch 1,  | abuseLovely. Another beautifully flowing poem, thank you |
| perpetual questions 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. We should stop worrying so much about the future and live more in the present, but sometimes it's hard to do... Nice message well expressed. I like it. Just one suggestion: "our eyes lock, and say just what I've been" should that be, "and you say"? Good job. |