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| Liam02 2007-08-19 ch 1,   | I like the imagery... you've done exactly what poetry is supposed to do- paint a picture too big or too abstract to do with actual imagery. What should be done on a canvas, you do with words. It makes me feel like I know EXACTLY what you're talking about...;) Good poem. I like it a lot. Best I've read in a long long time. |