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Elle Winters 9
2008-10-06
ch 25,
abuseHm i had a suspicion of that at first, but then I forgot all about it.

Dear me? What's the 'not a happy ending' thing about?
Elle Winters 9
2008-10-06
ch 23,
abuseYou know, being the observant girl I am, I finally realised his name was dEwei and not dAwei...
Elle Winters 9
2008-10-06
ch 13,
abuseok.. i have a feeling richard sent someone to get dawei.

but until then.. omg! it was so suspenseful (i say was because i couldn't bear to wait and see who it was before reviewing so i turned to the next chapter - one of the perks of readings stories after they're completed =) )

good job so far.
Elle Winters 9
2008-10-05
ch 4,
abuseok. i like it =)

dear me! it wasn't richard was it o.O.. holy crap!
Lilchany
2008-09-24
ch 27,
abuseI love this story! Im glad that your writing a sequel.
Jada Writes
2008-08-12
ch 1,
abuseHi, Silveralsa! I'm really excited to continue reading this story, as this is the first story about ballroom dancing that I have read on FictionPress. I've enjoyed the first chapter :).
toxicomanne
2008-08-07
ch 27, anon.
abuseGreat story! It had a good amount of everything in it... romance, adventure, a sense of tragedy... i really enjoyed reading it. I was wondering, since you wrote some stuff in Taiwanese (is that the language?) are you from Taiwan? cheers J
Acantha Alleyoope
2008-07-26
ch 26,
abuse!:):):)!
Oh it satisfied all my cheesy desires and more! Cheesy isn't bad, it's what I look for! Well-executed cheesy!

!
Acantha Alleyoope
2008-07-26
ch 24,
abuseWow. LOVE it. Why isnt this in the Action sub-genre?
Acantha Alleyoope
2008-07-26
ch 21,
abuseAw man! When I was at Fisherman's Wharf just recently, my family and I looked for our car for about an hour, and I remember saying who the ** built a city on a 45 degree slope! It's cruel. And I actually loled in the previous chapter in that bit where she says "Bathroom Break!"

Hilarious.
Acantha Alleyoope
2008-07-26
ch 17,
abuseHey i know this might be kind of vague, but this story is awesome. I haven't read it all the way to the end yet, but I still thought you'd appreciate a review. So far, I like the characters, and the narrative, but sometimes portrayal of Asian culture seems a little cheesy. I like how the story is geographically sound. Sometimes authors will say a story is in San Francisco and have their couple watching the sunrise and discontinuous things like that.

Cant wait to read the rest!
McShortShort
2008-07-25
ch 1,
abusewell this story seems pretty cool so far
Sam
2008-07-16
ch 18, anon.
abuseHello...
It's really refreshing to read your story. I am tired of all high school flicks, with over emotional teen thoughts of victimization for nothing..
Great job.
Sam.
reader
2008-07-11
ch 12, anon.
abuseI'm reading this again.
I can't help myself.
:D
Jazbkwm-unlucky-13
2008-07-09
ch 26,
abuseAwesome story. You made feel for May and Dewei. You did an amazing job. XD
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