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| Elle Winters 9 2008-10-06 ch 25,  | abuseHm i had a suspicion of that at first, but then I forgot all about it. Dear me? What's the 'not a happy ending' thing about? |
| Elle Winters 9 2008-10-06 ch 23, | abuseYou know, being the observant girl I am, I finally realised his name was dEwei and not dAwei... |
| Elle Winters 9 2008-10-06 ch 13, | abuseok.. i have a feeling richard sent someone to get dawei. but until then.. omg! it was so suspenseful (i say was because i couldn't bear to wait and see who it was before reviewing so i turned to the next chapter - one of the perks of readings stories after they're completed =) ) good job so far. |
| Elle Winters 9 2008-10-05 ch 4, | abuseok. i like it =) dear me! it wasn't richard was it o.O.. holy crap! |
| Lilchany 2008-09-24 ch 27, | abuseI love this story! Im glad that your writing a sequel. |
| Jada Writes 2008-08-12 ch 1, | abuseHi, Silveralsa! I'm really excited to continue reading this story, as this is the first story about ballroom dancing that I have read on FictionPress. I've enjoyed the first chapter :). |
| toxicomanne 2008-08-07 ch 27, anon. | abuseGreat story! It had a good amount of everything in it... romance, adventure, a sense of tragedy... i really enjoyed reading it. I was wondering, since you wrote some stuff in Taiwanese (is that the language?) are you from Taiwan? cheers J |
| Acantha Alleyoope 2008-07-26 ch 26, | abuse!:):):)! Oh it satisfied all my cheesy desires and more! Cheesy isn't bad, it's what I look for! Well-executed cheesy! ! |
| Acantha Alleyoope 2008-07-26 ch 24, | abuseWow. LOVE it. Why isnt this in the Action sub-genre? |
| Acantha Alleyoope 2008-07-26 ch 21, | abuseAw man! When I was at Fisherman's Wharf just recently, my family and I looked for our car for about an hour, and I remember saying who the ** built a city on a 45 degree slope! It's cruel. And I actually loled in the previous chapter in that bit where she says "Bathroom Break!" Hilarious. |
| Acantha Alleyoope 2008-07-26 ch 17, | abuseHey i know this might be kind of vague, but this story is awesome. I haven't read it all the way to the end yet, but I still thought you'd appreciate a review. So far, I like the characters, and the narrative, but sometimes portrayal of Asian culture seems a little cheesy. I like how the story is geographically sound. Sometimes authors will say a story is in San Francisco and have their couple watching the sunrise and discontinuous things like that. Cant wait to read the rest! |
| McShortShort 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abusewell this story seems pretty cool so far |
| Sam 2008-07-16 ch 18, anon. | abuseHello... It's really refreshing to read your story. I am tired of all high school flicks, with over emotional teen thoughts of victimization for nothing.. Great job. Sam. |
| reader 2008-07-11 ch 12, anon. | abuseI'm reading this again. I can't help myself. :D |
| Jazbkwm-unlucky-13 2008-07-09 ch 26, | abuseAwesome story. You made feel for May and Dewei. You did an amazing job. XD |