That was such a lovely story! It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I'm so glad that May and Dewei got their happy ending. Although, I was surprised to hear that Yuwen was Dewei's mother. Now she will be May's mother-in-law!!

You are a very good writer and I can't wait to read the sequel!

Until I Read The Sequel,
HBW or Julia E*

One of my favorite stories ever! Its different than other stories ive read. U did an awesome job on this.

Aw such a beautiful story!

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this was an awesome story to read...i love it that it has a Christian base to it :D great job
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Hello i think this is a rather good story, but i have some queries. Firstly, May's name has been bugging me since i started reading the story. Since her name is May Lee, with emphasis on her surname, shouldn't she be either chinese or korean? And in the first few chapters you described her eyes as green. Chinese or koreans usually have brown eyes, unless she's mixed?

At the start of every chapters there are a couple of chinese words below the title, are they supposed to link up to form a sentence or phrase, or are they just chinese translations of the title, because some chapters they apply but for other chapters they doesn't really apply.

Are you Taiwanese? Since there are so many references to Taiwan and i noticed that the chinese characters below each chapter title is fan ti, the old chinese letters which only Taiwan uses.

Hope that you can reply me soon with regards to my questions! I think that your writing isn't bad but it can be better if you don't emphasis so greatly on the broken english because it is rather awkward. Thanks for reading my very long review! haha this is the longest i've ever reviewed for anybody.

Hm i had a suspicion of that at first, but then I forgot all about it.

Dear me? What's the 'not a happy ending' thing about?

You know, being the observant girl I am, I finally realised his name was dEwei and not dAwei...

ok.. i have a feeling richard sent someone to get dawei.

but until then.. omg! it was so suspenseful (i say was because i couldn't bear to wait and see who it was before reviewing so i turned to the next chapter - one of the perks of readings stories after they're completed =) )

good job so far.

ok. i like it =)

dear me! it wasn't richard was it o.O.. holy crap!

I love this story! Im glad that your writing a sequel.

Hi, Silveralsa! I'm really excited to continue reading this story, as this is the first story about ballroom dancing that I have read on FictionPress. I've enjoyed the first chapter :).

Great story! It had a good amount of everything in it... romance, adventure, a sense of tragedy... i really enjoyed reading it. I was wondering, since you wrote some stuff in Taiwanese (is that the language?) are you from Taiwan? cheers J

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Oh it satisfied all my cheesy desires and more! Cheesy isn't bad, it's what I look for! Well-executed cheesy!

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Wow. LOVE it. Why isnt this in the Action sub-genre?

Aw man! When I was at Fisherman's Wharf just recently, my family and I looked for our car for about an hour, and I remember saying who the ** built a city on a 45 degree slope! It's cruel. And I actually loled in the previous chapter in that bit where she says "Bathroom Break!"

Hilarious.