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| Basara 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abusetrue to most wealthy people... almost all ( or maybe all ) are like those... rarity to find contentment in either side of material life... nice... |
| Kusje 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseAh yes, the horrors of materialism and narcassism; That's my take on it. Although, I suppose that I take it in a different way as well. 'She wants shiny lips' - I think should refer to having a new turnover or possibly erasing a part of herself? I suppose to make her feel more real and not invisible to the crowds, or those she wants to see her. 'So she can taste diamonds' - This should obviously refer to a high-state of life and the glamours of material things, but on the other hand, I think it might refer to a sense of mind where thoughts cost more than actions? 'That bleeds her poor soul' - Again, I suppose it means to be a part of something that doesn't give happiness, but grief only. Although, if she wants it, maybe she wants the pain and suffering? To feel like a type of doll that's put up well but is cripled inside? Interesting haiku! Thank you for reviewing mine! |
| Ashelin 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseI like this. The whole image you created was quite interesting. Thanks for the review by the way. Always appreciated. Keep up the good work. |
| kloun doll 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abusethe imagery is nice, sometimes appearances aren't everything. |