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Basara
2007-08-20
ch 1,
abusetrue to most wealthy people... almost all ( or maybe all ) are like those... rarity to find contentment in either side of material life...

nice...
Kusje
2007-08-18
ch 1,
abuseAh yes, the horrors of materialism and narcassism; That's my take on it.

Although, I suppose that I take it in a different way as well.

'She wants shiny lips' - I think should refer to having a new turnover or possibly erasing a part of herself? I suppose to make her feel more real and not invisible to the crowds, or those she wants to see her.

'So she can taste diamonds' - This should obviously refer to a high-state of life and the glamours of material things, but on the other hand, I think it might refer to a sense of mind where thoughts cost more than actions?

'That bleeds her poor soul' - Again, I suppose it means to be a part of something that doesn't give happiness, but grief only. Although, if she wants it, maybe she wants the pain and suffering? To feel like a type of doll that's put up well but is cripled inside?

Interesting haiku! Thank you for reviewing mine!
Ashelin
2007-08-18
ch 1,
abuseI like this. The whole image you created was quite interesting. Thanks for the review by the way. Always appreciated. Keep up the good work.
kloun doll
2007-08-18
ch 1,
abusethe imagery is nice, sometimes appearances aren't everything.
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