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Reviews For: Freezer Burn
All Alone With Her Thoughts
2007-08-22
ch 1, 		abuseI like it but I would get rid of the "verse 1, 2, 3" and "Chourus" things. It takes away from the song.

Thanks for the reviews and favourites.

Rowan.
mizu no kokoro
2007-08-20
ch 1, 		abusesuch a interesting poem. reminds me of childhood love.

good work

keep writing
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