beautiful poem :)

hopeful
but life isnt really so

an insightful piece... with a consistent rhyme scheme. something you truly don't see now-a-days. thank you for the enjoyable read. - a.d.

It is amazing, I absolutely love it. So thoughtful and heartfelt, it's really incredible. Great poem.
Tec ;)

Beautiful poem. I liked it a lot and you wrote it really well.
Good job! Xx