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| Excessum 2008-07-23 ch 4,  | abuseAwesome first chapters. I like the whole first person view swipes. |
| Omok 2008-07-08 ch 35, | abuseT-T this is like a filler, and we have waited such a long time for it too...*sighs* T-T |
| Anxiety 2008-07-04 ch 35, | abuseThat was interesting... I especially liked the idea of the Illusionist duel. Though, I must say, there is a little confusion that arises... Jasmine said: "I know from painful experience how formidable Stinger can be." which made me think that she had fought a duel with Stinger before... which is contradicted at the end of the chapter... it is just a weird way of stating that first fact... |
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2008-06-30 ch 35, | abuseOMG FINALLY YOU UPDATED! - shout aside - Interesting chapter, but i feel like the battle ended way too quickly. It was too sharp, to final and not at all satifying But i guess that was the point. Really awesome chapter and story. Ciao Sam |
| chibichoco 2008-06-30 ch 35, | abuseWoah. Really cool chapter. I'm glad Stinger won, and it really makes sense what she says. ^^ I really love your story. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. :) |
| D Wat 2008-06-15 ch 34, | abuseBrilliant story so far. Please update when you can :D |
| Harley Quinn Davidson 2008-05-22 ch 34, | abuseyay another chapter, i can't wait to see what happens since i kind of know that they get seperated. Update soon. |
| chibichoco 2008-05-22 ch 34, | abuseHehehe... nice chapter. I really like the interaction with Eadel and Jasmine. XD Love your story, and I'll be waiting for your next update. :) |
| Omok 2008-05-22 ch 34, | abuse*grins* darn...no details...LOL, i mean, eh, don't mind me *blushes* x_x up date please, I can't wait! lol, its been like months since you(ladies) last updated! >_ |
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2008-05-12 ch 33, | abuseomg, freaking HILARIOUS i have to say, you are a brilliantly awesomely amazingly godly author, and and i have one teeny request to make i love drama and miricals so... remeber you write that its incredibly rare for a mage to have more than one elemental power? and eadel had it, except she gave up her other making her common? in the gist of things, can you please make it so that when shes out of control, like she THOUGHT jazmine died BUT SHE DIDNT but of course she doesnt know that (you get the point) that she feels that weird surging feeling within her and she gets her wind AND fire powers back? please? i BEG you! please reply :) anyways, ill leave you to your writing update soon! and kutgw~! youre awesome ciao sam |
| Anxiety 2008-04-17 ch 33, | abuseBeen awhile since I had time to read, but the chapters so far have been pretty good. I like the castration thing and the "MY EYES THEY BURN" part. But one thing that I can't seem to figure out is Lyden's true intentions. For the most part, I'd say he is just trying to get into Fea's pants... under her dress might be more appropriate given the situation. But sometimes, I just don't know. |
| Harley Quinn Davidson 2008-04-06 ch 33, | abuseI love this story. Jasmine is sarcastic and they are so good together. I hope you update soon. |
| Omok 2008-04-01 ch 33, | abuse*stares* *grins* Quote: "publically getting very intimate." Why couldn't you(guys) get in to more detail(spelling) ? It wouldn't have HURT >=O *even if i was reading this in the public libery ._.* *laughs* well, nice/great chapter - as normal-! UP DATE SOON PL0X >=D |
| chibichoco 2008-03-31 ch 33, | abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OMGosh! That was so great! Lovely chapter. :) hehehe Lyden deserved that... XD Well, what can I say other than great job. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. :) |
| shiboo 2008-03-31 ch 33, | abuserevenge is so sweet 0_o |