You have a wonderful way of writing and I find this story tremendously intriguing. I hope to see you continue it soon.

wow, you two play off eachother so well i couldn't tell the differece between chapters!

the story is great and i am so happy to read about jasmines past! now i really wanna know what happened to Eadel...i keep thinking, 'did she get captured in the war?' 'did the inner kingdom win and her hometown was lost?' 'what happened to jasmine during those apparent 5 years?'

you make me think and i love it, i hope you update because i can't wait for the next chapter!

Great job I wonder how many chapters there are going to be. ^ - ^

Aww... cute chapter. It is a shame that they can't see into each other's minds though. :)

Aww long awaited update. and wowzors! this story have been up for more than a year now! XD wow. =) thanks for the update! it was...fulfilling. well, very limited. I don't have a full tummy yet. I hope you'd update soon.

O my gracious I love this! I kind of want to laugh at the irony of her using a poisoned dagger but at the same time its not funny. Know what I mean? Well anyway hahah.

Awesome first chapters. I like the whole first person view swipes.

T-T this is like a filler, and we have waited such a long time for it too...*sighs* T-T

That was interesting... I especially liked the idea of the Illusionist duel.

Though, I must say, there is a little confusion that arises... Jasmine said: "I know from painful experience how formidable Stinger can be." which made me think that she had fought a duel with Stinger before... which is contradicted at the end of the chapter... it is just a weird way of stating that first fact...

OMG
FINALLY
YOU UPDATED!
- shout aside -
Interesting chapter, but i feel like the battle ended way too quickly. It was too sharp, to final and not at all satifying
But i guess that was the point.

Really awesome chapter and story.
Ciao
Sam

Woah. Really cool chapter. I'm glad Stinger won, and it really makes sense what she says. ^^ I really love your story. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. :)

Brilliant story so far. Please update when you can :D

yay another chapter, i can't wait to see what happens since i kind of know that they get seperated. Update soon.

Hehehe... nice chapter. I really like the interaction with Eadel and Jasmine. XD Love your story, and I'll be waiting for your next update. :)

*grins* darn...no details...LOL, i mean, eh, don't mind me *blushes*

x_x up date please, I can't wait! lol, its been like months since you(ladies) last updated! >_