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| The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-02-15 ch 1,  | abuseWOW! That was AWESOME! You have real God-given talent here, and I'm glad that you are using it this way! Write on! Pen.Dragon |
| Captain Lucky 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseSo true. I've thought about this a lot. The world would be so different if people would just reach out just a bit. Well written! =) CL |
| review 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseinteresting analogy...a person is a sword eh? "As iron sharpens iron, so one man sharpens another." -Proverbs 27:17 |
| notwritten 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseexcellent very true |
| Iccle Fairy 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abusei really enjoyed this. very through provoking, i like the words you've chosen and again the way it flows! ~*~ |
| AuthorNinjaEarth 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseIt reminds me of when James talks about the power of the tongue. This poem is a very good application in illustrating and teaching that point extremely well. Thanks for sharing it with us. Excellent work! |
| Needa S 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! Going on my favorite's list. Write on and God Bless ya!! |
| a silenced revolution 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseGood question, good thing to think about. Nice work. |