I love this new re-write. Really hope you're continuing with it, I think it's improved but the original is still amazing. Love it. Really hope you haven't given up on it! It's really great.

This is an awesome story. I've read the original before, and I liked it. :s This is actually the first time that I actually wrote anything, though.

But the reason I'm "reviewing" is because I found someone that's plagiarizing your story on FanFiction (dot) Net... I don't know how to type the link out without it disappearing, but the story ID is 4953562. It's called Tales of Belonging, written by TwilightTsuki. Uh... It's a D. Gray-Man fanfiction.

Just typed to let you know.

This story has definitely changed for the better with this rewrite. My favorite parts so far are even more my favorite, while you added a couple more favorites. The characters are still dynamic and interestings with great contrasts. Nothing about this is boring. I know I've read the originally posted version already, but I can't wait to read more.

I love it!

please update sooN!

It's not a bad revision but I'm not quite sure what to think about it yet.

I really like the changes you have made to the story so far! I can't wait for the rest.

Hm, different, but more informative. I like it. :D

Man, you can write! The revision is coming along very well. you use excellent word choice and I only saw a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Overall, I like how you let the readers get to know the characters better before too much action takes place. That needs a lot of patience. So I look forward to your next update!

Just read through all your recent updates. Thank you so, so much for making my busy, drab life that much brighter. y favourite is still Orian's Star, but all of your writing is great.

I really am enjoying this rewrite! Your writing style has improved a lot and it makes the character more real and accessible to the reader. :) I'll be keeping up!

I liked the original finding heaven but I think that this one is even better and more believable. Good so far, and I can't wait for the next chapter to see how it's changed.

yay!! I'm so happy you have updated :) Great chapter!

I'm loving the rewite just as much as the original. I think this one is flowing more smotthly, and it has a much more believable time line this time around, too. not to say I didn't love the original, cause I totally did. But this version is definately better. I can't wait for the next installment

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like the story.

great chapter
I like how they interact and the destin is in school