 LeahDude 2009-09-02 . chapter 4I love this new re-write. Really hope you're continuing with it, I think it's improved but the original is still amazing. Love it. Really hope you haven't given up on it! It's really great. |
 Anonymous 2009-03-29 . chapter 1 This is an awesome story. I've read the original before, and I liked it. :s This is actually the first time that I actually wrote anything, though.
But the reason I'm "reviewing" is because I found someone that's plagiarizing your story on FanFiction (dot) Net... I don't know how to type the link out without it disappearing, but the story ID is 4953562. It's called Tales of Belonging, written by TwilightTsuki. Uh... It's a D. Gray-Man fanfiction.
Just typed to let you know. |
 Jabberwocky 101 2009-03-06 . chapter 4This story has definitely changed for the better with this rewrite. My favorite parts so far are even more my favorite, while you added a couple more favorites. The characters are still dynamic and interestings with great contrasts. Nothing about this is boring. I know I've read the originally posted version already, but I can't wait to read more. |
 StoicCrying 2009-02-28 . chapter 4I love it!
please update sooN! |
 S.Carmela.M. 2008-10-15 . chapter 4It's not a bad revision but I'm not quite sure what to think about it yet. |
 Kalico 2008-09-17 . chapter 4I really like the changes you have made to the story so far! I can't wait for the rest. |
 i-see-faeries 2008-09-06 . chapter 1Hm, different, but more informative. I like it. :D |
 Maggie Misery 2008-08-27 . chapter 4Man, you can write! The revision is coming along very well. you use excellent word choice and I only saw a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Overall, I like how you let the readers get to know the characters better before too much action takes place. That needs a lot of patience. So I look forward to your next update! |
 Wolfwitch 2008-08-26 . chapter 4Just read through all your recent updates. Thank you so, so much for making my busy, drab life that much brighter. y favourite is still Orian's Star, but all of your writing is great. |
 Seque Me ad Meum Somnium 2008-08-20 . chapter 4I really am enjoying this rewrite! Your writing style has improved a lot and it makes the character more real and accessible to the reader. :) I'll be keeping up! |
 Fictatiousrambler 2008-08-17 . chapter 4I liked the original finding heaven but I think that this one is even better and more believable. Good so far, and I can't wait for the next chapter to see how it's changed. |
 darrena 2008-08-17 . chapter 4yay!! I'm so happy you have updated :) Great chapter! |
 Mikiyu 2008-08-16 . chapter 4 I'm loving the rewite just as much as the original. I think this one is flowing more smotthly, and it has a much more believable time line this time around, too. not to say I didn't love the original, cause I totally did. But this version is definately better. I can't wait for the next installment |
 DRAGONFIRE04 2008-08-16 . chapter 4PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like the story. |
 kulash 2008-08-15 . chapter 4great chapter
I like how they interact and the destin is in school |