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| Vexed and Tired 2007-08-21 ch 1,  | abuseIt's nice to see that you've kept your attitude and haven't yet wallowed into depressing-ville. I think this song would have done much better if you hadn't stuck to such a rigid rhyming scheme. Even still, I couldn't help but enjoy the lines "But now you’ve gotten me in a writing mood And my thoughts of you are ever so lewd" Good luck in future writing efforts. |