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| thecolourgrey 2008-02-06 ch 1,  | abusehey...i had the same spell some time ago, so i could totally relate to this poem. i loved the message in it, but i always have this thing against underlines and italics, so i couldnt really say i like the style of this poem. but maybe thats just me though. Good job! thanks for the reviews! :) |
| XxBlackChaosxX 2007-08-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is definately my favorite poem from you. I like how you embedded FEELING into the words...Actual feelings, not just something coming out of nowhere. I enjoy how you (guessing) incorperated the current state of the world and how it's not the same as it used to be, and I like that sort of thing. I also like the tatic you used to emphasize certain phrases by underlining them. Let's write another poem! |
| PocoSnow15 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseI understand this. I really do. And after reading it, I've remember I haven't added you to my favorite authors list. Silly me. So I have to go and check that little box down there and submit this. Wonderful job. You're an amazing writer. |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is like a cross between styles. It's got a bit of short, jabby lines, a bit of strange underlines and italics, and a bit of the standard. Overall, the words aren't particularly impressive. It's not an incredible poem, but it's not a bad one either. It's simple and to the point. A bit depressing, I'll admit, but the quality is okay. Personally, I'd amend the "no grammar" deal, but that's also a stylistic matter, so it's not for me to say. Mostly, though, I think it's an interesting medley of a series of styles that can be found nowadays. Nice job with that. |
| darks00 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseCool poem :) I hope you don't feel like that anymore, though. xxDarkness' Kidxx |