Reviews for Shiroi Stitches - FictionPress.com

MistyRose14 2007-12-14 ch 2,	i'm surprised at how she's been there for three hundred years...and hasn't broken a major rule. gotta love the characters - they're so dynamic! c'est très chouette et à plus!
MistyRose14 2007-08-19 ch 1,	yay! it's up! at long last...anyways, nice job on the first chapter (which seemed more like a prologue to me)! love ya lots, ma soeur!
AK the Twilight 2007-08-19 ch 1,	This story is an interesting approach to imprisonment. The Shinigami concept does show a more interesting spin than simple incarceration. You need to be careful with all the inserts. There so many hyphens all over the place and it can be pretty difficult to stay focused. Try to find ways to integrate the descriptions into the story itself, instead of simply inserting lines. The beginning and ending also don't show much connection. Many of the questions will most likely be resolved later on in the story, but try to find a smooth transition in connecting the imprisonment and the family factor of the beginning. This story is full of rich metaphors and descriptions and is worth continuing. Great job, overall.