Reviews for Reminding me of the past

KirbyVictorious
2007-08-30
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abuseHello. ^^ Why this is rated T I do not know, nor do I want to.

Your rhyming is lovely. But it is, maybe, a little forced--I suggest experimenting with different ways to phrase things. Use your common sense to tell if it works or not.

Beautiful imagery. I love the inner workings of your mind. (:

~Kirby

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