|Reviews for Color Me Blood Red|
| Femaleking 9/1/07 . chapter 1
This is a beautiful poem, the third stanza is my favourite. The imagery is wonderful yet slightly macabre. I like the last line, and how you've put it into brackets and italicised it, which makes it stand out and in a way seperates it from the rest of the poem (if that makes sense).
| tearing hands 8/26/07 . chapter 1
"Their mouths bleed broken secrets." That's my favorite line. Beautiful.
| nvt4g 8/20/07 . chapter 1
ayos 'to, ganda
| Basara 8/20/07 . chapter 1
answered lies and questionable lies...
| Kusje 8/19/07 . chapter 1
'The real truth behind the truth,
For their lips are filled
With taboo crimson roses'
My favorite part of the haiku - You did such a great job.
I have no critiques, this is a beautiful haiku :)
| xDancingintheRainx 8/19/07 . chapter 1
I really like this. Its beautiful. I like the last two stanzas best and the ending is perfect. Great job.