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Reviews For: Color Me Blood Red

Femaleking
2007-09-01
ch 1,
abuseThis is a beautiful poem, the third stanza is my favourite. The imagery is wonderful yet slightly macabre. I like the last line, and how you've put it into brackets and italicised it, which makes it stand out and in a way seperates it from the rest of the poem (if that makes sense).
tearing hands
2007-08-26
ch 1,
abuse"Their mouths bleed broken secrets." That's my favorite line. Beautiful.
nvt4g
2007-08-20
ch 1,
abuseayos 'to, ganda
Basara
2007-08-20
ch 1,
abuseanswered lies and questionable lies...

nice...
Kusje
2007-08-19
ch 1,
abuse'The real truth behind the truth,
For their lips are filled
With taboo crimson roses'

My favorite part of the haiku -- You did such a great job.

I have no critiques, this is a beautiful haiku :)

*favoriting!*
xDancingintheRainx
2007-08-19
ch 1,
abuseI really like this. Its beautiful. I like the last two stanzas best and the ending is perfect. Great job.
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