| Reviews for Color Me Blood Red |
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Femaleking 9/1/07 . chapter 1This is a beautiful poem, the third stanza is my favourite. The imagery is wonderful yet slightly macabre. I like the last line, and how you've put it into brackets and italicised it, which makes it stand out and in a way seperates it from the rest of the poem (if that makes sense). |
tearing hands 8/26/07 . chapter 1"Their mouths bleed broken secrets." That's my favorite line. Beautiful. |
nvt4g 8/20/07 . chapter 1ayos 'to, ganda |
Basara 8/20/07 . chapter 1answered lies and questionable lies... nice... |
Kusje 8/19/07 . chapter 1'The real truth behind the truth, For their lips are filled With taboo crimson roses' My favorite part of the haiku - You did such a great job. I have no critiques, this is a beautiful haiku :) *favoriting!* |
xDancingintheRainx 8/19/07 . chapter 1I really like this. Its beautiful. I like the last two stanzas best and the ending is perfect. Great job. |