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| Thenardier 2007-09-02 ch 1,  | abuseI love the vivid imagery involved in this. i could actually see this haiku coming to live. Though on a personal note, I would love to see some works from you that are a little more cheerful. Would love to see your provocative style mixed with something light. But hey, that's just me. Once again, good job. |
| kloun doll 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abusedark with the feeling of mysterious around it. |
| Basara 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseromantic ( a dark feel )... nice... |
| Ashelin 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. That sort of nineteenth century gothic feel. It was a good haiku. Good job! |