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Reviews For: Moonshine

A.R. Mouse
2007-10-18
ch 1,
abuseSo sad and so pretty. Very well written. I love the idea of catching the moonlight, since most people would think of catching sunlight instead. Good job, keep it up.

+MOUSE
Ashelin
2007-08-19
ch 1,
abuseThis is sad. In the end the tragedy seems almost intentional, like because the girl believed herself to be so unworthy she forced the moonlight away from her. It was a good poem, and interesting thought. The title kind of threw me off because I was thinking about the other type of moonshine. Haha. Good job.
Nonya Soum
2007-08-19
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful imagery and a great story! So bittersweet and light too. I like how you use moonlight to represent a type of filler or distraction for/from the faults. It's a beautiful object to use and makes for a better picture. Poetry portraying real life with objects and literal applications are great, but I think metaphors are fantastic. Anyway, I like it!! Fantastic job!!

Write on!!
perpetual questions
2007-08-19
ch 1,
abuseInteresting concept. I like it. Great job as always.
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