|Reviews for Moonshine|
| Alice Faraday 10/18/07 . chapter 1
So sad and so pretty. Very well written. I love the idea of catching the moonlight, since most people would think of catching sunlight instead. Good job, keep it up.
| Ashelin 8/19/07 . chapter 1
This is sad. In the end the tragedy seems almost intentional, like because the girl believed herself to be so unworthy she forced the moonlight away from her. It was a good poem, and interesting thought. The title kind of threw me off because I was thinking about the other type of moonshine. Haha. Good job.
| Nonya Soum 8/19/07 . chapter 1
Beautiful imagery and a great story! So bittersweet and light too. I like how you use moonlight to represent a type of filler or distraction for/from the faults. It's a beautiful object to use and makes for a better picture. Poetry portraying real life with objects and literal applications are great, but I think metaphors are fantastic. Anyway, I like it! Fantastic job!
| a silenced revolution 8/19/07 . chapter 1
Interesting concept. I like it. Great job as always.