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Mitochondriac 2008-04-24 ch 1,	abuselaughs That was great! I love it, way sweet, ths is going on my favorites! Thanks^.^ Hachel
Elkica 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abuseThat was really great. Ellis is really great character and it got me sucked right in the story. The only thing is I'm a little bothered by the end, the story doesn't really sounds (in my opinion) concluded; and I'm as soon I push that Submit review button, going on your profile and there better be a sequel to this, or I'm going to be sad, very sad indeed.
jadelin 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abusePretty crazy--you're only 17 years old and write about real office life very well! I'm the age of the people in the story, and I really love how you've caught the subtleties excellently. :) Please continue this story.
gummybaby 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseoh, this was great! Jack is too awesome for words...great characterization there.
mia5081 2008-01-06 ch 1,	abuseTotally loved this--Jack is the best narrator ever, I could listen to him rant about Leslie for hours lol Good job! ~Mia
nomy 2008-01-05 ch 1,	abusethats a different story..hurm..like more unusual story line than normal..you will do a continuity story wouldn't you?you are not that mean to left me hanging would you?cause if you did..i simply will hate you! haha.. but seriously ..its like so totally a different type of the normal story that i read and its like so obvious that Christian kinda like him ..but im not that clever so you MUST write more !!..i want Christian to say he like Jackie opss Jack..haha..do write more..and i know you stated a one shot..but you can do more than a one shot rite?so do it please? i just love your story..
paputsza 2007-12-29 ch 1,	abuse-.- i don't care that christmas is done with. je vais un sequel, oui... i need a sequel, oui. grr this is so cute.
MUMSI 2007-12-07 ch 1,	abusegah! you make me squee and girly!clap like wo! wow. that was crazy funny- Ellis is my hero. seriously. his humor was on the mark. his reaction to mail man made me snort hot chocolate. Oh, and the hot, you brought the hot: "'You will soon.'" sexiest. lines. ever GUH I love how Christian's so assertive and so obviously obsessed with Ellis. HOT! Ellis is so adorably clueless. that nerd. go bang your boss already. and tell us about it. please- no. really. please? by-th-by: this story's been favorited like wo!
A Scarred Soul 2007-11-25 ch 1,	abuseOh my god! This is such an adorable story, how can it be complete?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Please, please please, please, please add more to it, I ABSOLUTELY MUST read more! PLEASE? irresistable puppy dog eyes
Jai Grey 2007-11-21 ch 1,	abuseReally cool
Casey.Duh 2007-10-22 ch 1,	abuseI love Christian. Hands down... and all around! Shake yo booty shake yo booty. I like to sing... and dance. With words. In reviews. (Those were amazing sentences. Breathe them in.)
vspirit 2007-10-19 ch 1, anon.	abusewhew. just read it again and i'm lovin it all over again. and the only thing i can say is...MOAR! one thing i'm confused about tho...is marcelle a blonde or brunette?
iFruit 2007-10-13 ch 1,	abuseGod, I love your work. If I was a sicko, I would say something with sacrificial lambs and masturbation, but I'm not. Seriously. I'm not. My most favorite thing about this one-shot is that it was so ** long! I was sacrificing lambs and loving it for that long. I was able to read Jack's psychotic thoughts for that long for over the span of something-or-other days. This one-shot inspired me to write a one-shot, which I will not mention because this is your time to shine, not mine. (Goddamn, I probably sound like a lunatic.) I've noticed that your main characters--in this account at least, i still haven't been able to find other stories by you--are really, really clueless, that or I'm overanalytical. (Is that a word? I really think it should, if it's not.) I love when people are clueless idiots. Even more when they're cynical, clueless idiots. I adoreadoreadore your work!
theapathycrusade 2007-10-11 ch 1,	abuseloved it! haha, it was fantastic. i was kind of sad when it finished, but i really really enjoyed it. Jackie and Christian. well done!
TheGodMachine 2007-09-22 ch 1,	abuseAwesome story, I hope you write a sequel for it.

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