|Reviews for Failure|
| aslans-sword 8/20/07 . chapter 1
Nice. I like the way you say it.
| Professional Dreamer 8/20/07 . chapter 1
Interesting...It almost feels like there is a more hopeful shift in the last two lines. Particularly like 'pity in the eyes of peers'. That is the worst thing.
| flies.like.decay 8/20/07 . chapter 1
Yeah. I always fail.
I have no confidence in myself, so I don't let myself do anything. Again, I always fail. Good job on the poem ;)