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| A.V.Mackie 2008-10-04 ch 21,  | abuseWoo, story one done and dusted (heh), and thoroughly enjoyed. I loved your wit and humour throughout and Alex's dithering over Zane and Ty is wonderful to read. Anyway, you have another two stories in this series already written, so I'm go enjoy them now. :D |
| A.V.Mackie 2008-10-04 ch 7, | abuseAw *sigh* I can't stop laughing at that last bit. "Window." Class. I'm loving your style of humour, it just gets me laughing all the time. Anyway, I'll get back to reading the story now, I just had to say that... |
| Insanely Twisted 2008-08-06 ch 20, anon. | abuse:O LET ZANE LIVE! |
| Insanely Tiwsted 2008-08-06 ch 19, anon. | abuseI'm completely hooked (:L Great job. |
| Insanely Twisted 2008-08-05 ch 12, anon. | abuseZane, fer sho. :] |
| Insanely Twisted 2008-08-05 ch 10, anon. | abuseWow, this story is so great. It just kinda popped up in one of my random google searches, and ever since I've been reading :D My favorite character is Zane, fer shure. Great job. (:L |
| smellgoody 2008-07-20 ch 15, | abusethis sounds so much like twilight. it's a well written story though. i like it :D |
| Kura-sama 2008-06-16 ch 21, | abuseSo CUTE~ Aww I love Zane >w |
| Kura-sama 2008-06-16 ch 12, | abuseLove to story~ Definitely love Zane XD Ty is ... alright, but nothing's hotter than a hot vampire XD Dang... I'd take the vampire any day. Will continue to read tomorrow... or rather later today XD It's 4am and I got to go sleep if I plan to wake up tomorrow at all |
| lvtwilight 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseomg this chapter is really good lol |
| xvwvx 2008-01-04 ch 21, | abuseFinished the story. It was great. I'm already gonna start on your second one. Very very good :) |
| xvwvx 2007-12-30 ch 4, | abuseI'm late to the party, but I just wanted to say I'm loving the story so far. |
| rosexofxflame 2007-12-02 ch 21, | abuseahh! amazing story (applause) ... off to read the sequel! =] |
| LoveSupernaturally 2007-11-28 ch 21, | abuseoh, i loved it ! but then again i am a sucker for freaking awesome vampire love stories. And love triangles. My only nit pick is that the kissing could have been a bit more descriptive. But I understand when a person is thinking about the kiss they just had, they don't need to be descriptive of it cause they where paying attention and eather loved or hated every second of it. Some good describtive words will fix that, hot, wet, soft, suckulent, daring, kinky Get the idae . Oh other question, whats up with all the stakes? i thought you said in the first few chapters the only way to kill a vamp is to chop off there head, heance Zane ( love the name) with the weird not metal knife in the trench coat. ok well i'm off to R&R Branded. Keep up the good work Caro |
| VirginiaVortex 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseha! Okay, so stupid me decided to read the first chapter of the sequel before I realized it was a sequel. Wow. Anyways, this is really well-written. |