   AyannaFairchild 2009-10-07 . chapter 1in order to make this story better i think you should stop using such short sentences. even though the character says she uses fragments a lot the only thing it does is make her sound illiterate and lame |
 Kirhava 2009-07-12 . chapter 1Hello!
I just began reading your story and I like it.
But I have to say it: there is no country named Columbia. It's Colombia. It bothers me a little bit seeing it misspelled, 'cause I'm Colombian...
Apart from that, I'm really enjoying your fic. I promise you that I'll leave you another review at the last chapter.
Greetings. |
 cajun-cuteness 2008-12-19 . chapter 25Okay, I like the ending and I don't. I wish that Scarlet and Josh could've resisted the memory wipe with their LOVE or something. That would've been sweet. |
| cajun-cuteness 2008-12-19 . chapter 24 NO! |
| cajun-cuteness 2008-12-19 . chapter 23 OMG! So sweet!! |
| cajun-cuteness 2008-12-19 . chapter 22 Scarlet the Spy...
EEP!
I love it! |
| cajun-cuteness 2008-12-19 . chapter 21 OMG. I WANT IT TO SNOW! |
| cajun-cuteness 2008-12-19 . chapter 20 Poor Toby.
XD |
| cajun-cuteness 2008-12-19 . chapter 19 Wow...
just wow... |
| cajun-cuteness 2008-12-19 . chapter 15 OH NO!! Joanna with powers?? NOT GOOD! |
| cajun-cuteness 2008-12-19 . chapter 14 EEP!
This is funny! |
| cajun-cuteness 2008-12-19 . chapter 13 Oh NOES! |
| cajun-cuteness 2008-12-19 . chapter 12 HEEHEEHEEHEE!!
Omg. that sounds so romantic!! |
| cajun-cuteness 2008-12-19 . chapter 11 LOL. Baseball bat. |
| cajun-cuteness 2008-12-19 . chapter 10 EEP. bad idea. Josh and geniece= BAD. |
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