aww really, really good! i do think its a mistake not writing a sequel though... but hay, it doesnt matter, and you did a great job with the first one!

I'm really, truly amazed at how this story only got better and better. With every new chapter, I was even more impressed with your talents as a writer.

Thanks for much for writing this, and I hope to see more from you soon!

~Carm~

Okay, one thing. Why doesn't she phone some help instead of texting??

Oh, alright. Andy is fine too...

Rawr, I like Adam better! Oh yeah, and you don't really have much of her "great close friends" in here.

Hmm... is this bad?

Pfft... I have a cousin named Adam, and a friend named adam, so I keep on picturing THEM...

F.A.S.T... dude, he met her freaking YESTERDAY... (well, saw her for the first time)...

Mymymy...

Wha? This is a little fast. But good :)

Ohh...

Sorry, sorry, sorry! I didn't mean to take so long to review. I had read this when I had had a smidgen of time, but never managed to leave a review. But here I am :)

I can't get over how well this story is put together. It reads so smoothly, and it's so intriguing. This chapter was just as fantastic as the rest of them.

I'll try my best not to take a million kajillion years next time ;)

~Carm~

Okay, so I've been the worst reviewer in the history of reviewers. I'm so sorry for taking so long!

This story is still as good as ever. Even if I haven't read it in awhile, the minute I read a few paragraphs, it all comes back to me; the characters, the plot, the style of writing, everything. It takes an amazing story, and not to mention, author, to do that :)

Keep this up, and update soon!

~Carm~

I'm so glad I found the time to read this. Amazing job! I love how everything is developing more and more, making this a real story story. Not sure if that makes sense, but you know what I mean :)

Loved it, and I can't wait for more!

~Carm~

ADAM IS SUCH A BASTARD! UHH!!Hmm its sorta weird, but i got the weird feeling that andy sort of well, knew that adam would be there kissing that chick in the middle of the dance floor thingo! Hmm. Maybe its just me being weird lol...Her dreams seem quite real, i wonder if adam and andy actually know each other? That would be cool, at the same time akward! Anywayz nice story keep updating! cu