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| missboo13 2007-08-27 ch 6, | This was a little more confusing than the other chapters. Maybe if you are changing scenes or settings, make a line between paragraphs next time. Other than that, it was great. --Miss Boo |
| missboo13 2007-08-26 ch 5, | Oh, now I'm curious as to how this happened. Please, keep writing, because I can't wait to read the next chapter! --Miss Boo |
| missboo13 2007-08-24 ch 4, | Another great two chapters! I can't wait to read the next ones. --Miss Boo |
| missboo13 2007-08-21 ch 2, | Another great chapter. And thanks for working on the grammar, I didn't have any trouble at all figuring out what you were trying to say this time. I can't wait to read another chapter! |
| BabyPop Massacre 2007-08-21 ch 2, | Very Amusing! P.S.:That's for reading mine. -Lycrester |
| Anonymous 2007-08-21 ch 1, | LMAO. Fascinating. |
| All You Wanted 2007-08-20 ch 1, | I like this! All I suggest is that you fix some punctuation here or there, but this is otherwise very good. Keep going! |
| Ruri Arisama 2007-08-20 ch 1, | Oh I think your story is great! Thanks for the review onto mine! -sweatdrop- Yeah I tend to forget those. But thanks anyway! Best of wishes and good luck! -Ruri |
| missboo13 2007-08-20 ch 1, | Pretty good story, I would read another chapter if you were to write one. There were a few gramatical mistakes that made it a bit hard to concentrate on, mostly because I had to go back and re-read the sentence to understand it, but other than that, I thought it was cool. |