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Reviews For: Killer's Anonymous

missboo13
2007-08-27
ch 6,
This was a little more confusing than the other chapters. Maybe if you are changing scenes or settings, make a line between paragraphs next time. Other than that, it was great.

--Miss Boo
missboo13
2007-08-26
ch 5,
Oh, now I'm curious as to how this happened. Please, keep writing, because I can't wait to read the next chapter!

--Miss Boo
missboo13
2007-08-24
ch 4,
Another great two chapters! I can't wait to read the next ones.

--Miss Boo
missboo13
2007-08-21
ch 2,
Another great chapter. And thanks for working on the grammar, I didn't have any trouble at all figuring out what you were trying to say this time. I can't wait to read another chapter!
BabyPop Massacre
2007-08-21
ch 2,
Very Amusing!
P.S.:That's for reading mine.

-Lycrester
Anonymous
2007-08-21
ch 1,
LMAO. Fascinating.
All You Wanted
2007-08-20
ch 1,
I like this! All I suggest is that you fix some punctuation here or there, but this is otherwise very good. Keep going!
Ruri Arisama
2007-08-20
ch 1,
Oh I think your story is great! Thanks for the review onto mine! -sweatdrop- Yeah I tend to forget those. But thanks anyway!
Best of wishes and good luck!
-Ruri
missboo13
2007-08-20
ch 1,
Pretty good story, I would read another chapter if you were to write one. There were a few gramatical mistakes that made it a bit hard to concentrate on, mostly because I had to go back and re-read the sentence to understand it, but other than that, I thought it was cool.
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