Neehee Shaffan.

=D CD

I love Lymsa, she's absolutely wonderful! And poor Jos...he could certainly do with a bit of distraction.

Also...YAY SHAFFAN!!

Is that... who I think it is?

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Oh man did I need this! Jos is so hopelessly cute, and I love Lymsa... Marric is a dork, I love him too.

Oyshe, poor Jos. And things won't get any better for him, will they? He needs a Pundit doll or something...maybe a teddy. :D And Rai gets to be appropriately dramatic. Awesomeness!

Ooh! A new chapter... it made me shiver, the last part, talking about the memorial to Linera and Barth... And now it's Rai's turn to fight.

And Jos is being cute.

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Aww... This is cool.

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FINALLY got to read this. gah.

Something about it shove a fist in my stomach and rearranged bits. That's a good thing, but I don't know what words can explain why... Rai's being so cold. :( Poor Jos.

Well, she stalked out the door, not stocked, but other than that,

BWEE!!

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Jos is such a darling... I love him. His feelings for Rai are so sweet and unspoiled (I know, that word comes out of me too much), and he's just plain cool into the bargain. I like his friends better with each chapter, which might be strange of me. Eheh.

I really wonder how his interest in Rai is going to pan out...

Yeah!! This chapter was great! Marric is very much 'da man', if I may state simply.

The dialogue was enrapturing (yea, a new word!) and the narrative along with it!

I get the feeling Jos is gonna be extremely dissapointed a little later on...?

Hee. This is going to be fun, I know it.

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Whoa! Interesting bit with the auto-drama-machine(aka her magic wind)...Rai could make billions at Hollywood. XD

Tension built up at the beginning (which kept us readers glued to the story) washed away nicely with the tide of future adventure later in the story...I know I'm bad with analogies but you get my drift.

:evillaugh: Lymsa. >:D

Marric seems hes gonna be pretty cool, I dunno. We shall see.

...I need new positive words!! Using 'great' and 'nifty' over an over again is getting redundant for such masterpiece!! Any suggestions?

You know, I honestly wonder how successful this quest will be. Mattif does the anguish thing well...as we might expect. ;p

Sorry it took me so long! Gah.

Jos and his defence of Rai are both awesome, and very cute. I wonder if it'll come to anything...? Great description of the domestic life. :D